True Partners my first machinima

Hey everybody I'm looking to become a machinima director and improve my skills as an overall director and screen writer. I began this journey a couple months ago when I created my first machinima. It has gotten pretty good feedback and Im always looking for more. Sadly I havent been able to make anymore machinima because of hardware difficulties. Anyway, heres my machinima and please let me know what you think. Thanks!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8OyjZTc0N5k